WRITING: Tom from Auckland Prison (best 4)

Once upon a time there was a man who lived in Auckland jail. He was called Tom. He stole something. One day when he picked up rubbish, he saw a pretty girl. He married her. At their wedding ceremony, the lights went out because the fuse was broken. Then he began to cry because he disliked dark places. She saw his state and she got tired of him. Then she decided to get divorced. He lived in jail alone.

- by Yoshi

Once upon a time there was a man named Tom. One day, he drove a bus and crashed into a student who was crossing the road. After that, he was accused of driving recklessly nd committing a crime, so he was sent to Auckland jail. Every day he had to pick up some rubbins for his punnishment. He considered that his life in the jail was so boring because he didn't have the internet or even a cellphone to contact his family in Saudi Arabia. Two months later, when his 30th birthday came, he asked permission from a warden to go back to his hometown, since he could not stand missing his wife and his family. However, while he flew back to Saudi Arabia, his lover and his siblings left for NZ to visit him in jail. For this reason, prisioners have been provided the internet access since then.

- by Bee

Once upson a time there was a man, whose name was Tom. He lived in Auckland...